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Well you are right. I will develop story from next chapter. It's going to be slow pace story. I will give only important information about the rewards from now on. Thanks for the review. Sorry for any mistake as it's my first time writing a story.

honestly you could cut out a good portion of each character info by just not listing what they've done with their abilities more than what's required to understand what the ability does and how strong it is I've also noticed you get a bit repetitive when talking about characters abilities too so paying attention to that would be good as well but still you're doing a good job on the book overall

don't worry your story is going pretty well leaving aside the fact I already mentioned and I hope you continue to make the story as you prefer to make it

I thank you for having listened to my advice after all it is your story and I have no right to tell you anything about it but I appreciate that you considered it