I already read this fanfic until chapter 1000 or so. Overall it's a good story, the protagonist isn't a stupid person or anything like that. It's a shame that the MC ends up following Tang San and the story falls into the situation where the MC doesn't bring major changes to the story, but is there to shine in the highlights (Like the combat evaluation at the sherk academy). This goes until the spiritual masters tournament in which he does not participate with the sherk academy. Another annoying point is your system, which at a certain point was kind of "blocked" and wouldn't log in, but it was only when the MC went through a near-death event that the system decided to log in, saving the MC.
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