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Pancho_Uy
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2024-11-07 08:13

The novel is insane. Logic non existent. Consistency is something that happens in other stories. Characters are highly unrelatable (except for the cat girl, the Sylvester healer girl and Luna to an extent). MC is just a psycho. Yes, he was betrayed. Yes, I like his revenge, and his convoluted and layered ploys are pretty good. But he treats everyone as a tool or as a means to an end, even the good ones (those two). There is an insane amount of time skips and flashbacks. The plot is complex and clever, and the author must have put in a lot of work, but most things are delivered in such a chaotic way, that half the events don't make sense at all.

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The novel has a villain tag for a reason.

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