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2024-02-21 21:23

Everything so far is going well, the world gondo, the power system, the writing improves over time, but what is the need to add more love interests? If you already have someone, why add another girl? Also they have known each other for a few weeks while the other girl for months please author be serious, don't waste this piece of work on harem. It's just that I don't understand the need to add burden to the MC, this MC is clear that she seeks the top because she wants to be strong, why restrict her with romance or set stupid ambitions based on other people's interests, please reconsider and leave her as a friend, at the same time Just like Jane Aiken and the others, think of other works like "swallowed star" the MC is destined to overcome the limit of his cultivation system so think of that author and leave the MC free just like that author did.

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how is the romance about? dose he have a few girls? any 18+?

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