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Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv41yr
2023-10-26 04:06

read to about chap 70. I really enjoyed the novel at first. There were several fairly unique concepts that added some pressure to the story. And then the author just got rid of those points. Even still it didn't do anything majorly wrong, until you consider it's the bare minimum length requirement for chapters, requiring you too pay to read. Not worth it.

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DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

Agreed. The translator divides each chapter into 3 or 4. I can't even articulate an insult good enough to truly insult him. Moreover, he doesn't even do a good job at translating.

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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

I finished reading the raws after a week. It was a good story. The author really did a good job. Even though he was forced to end it at chapter 327 because of health problems. While I was expecting it to end soon, the way he wrote it didn't seem like it was rushed because it was a plausible possibility. The thing I liked the most about this novel was the plot, and how the author could always come up with ideas for simulations. Unfortunately the author is bad at fight scenes, but to be honest I didn't realize that until around chapter 260, because even if he can't write detailed blood-pumping fight scenes, and it's more like a general summary, the plot of the novel itself is great enough.To be honest, I usually hate romance in these novels, and I remember being annoyed when Wang Ping kept marrying and dying in simulations because of that in the first few chapters. But still, after Ji Bingyue and Xue'er were introduced and became Wang Ping's partner in those specific simulations. Because of the impact they played I liked their characters and I always wondered if he would choose them as a partner. Though that hope was killed when the truth about Ji Bingyan was revealed.The ending was okay. It ties in with the start but I feel kind of sad that it showed him alone rather than with friends/family or a partner.Though it ends at chapter 327 don't think it's short. Most of the authors chapters are 10k words long so it's actually not a quick novel to finish. I checked Qidian and it says the novel has 2.157 million words. According to the last authors note, the author said he originally wanted to write 5 million words, but because of health complications he was forced to end it and choose his health over making money which I approve of. Especially since the ending just skipped other things that just just extend word count, and only wrote the important plot.

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