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SalveYing
SalveYingLv1111mth
2024-01-13 06:48

The concept isn't bad, but everything unfolds too quickly; it feels rushed and convenient. Conveniently, they encounter an individual transmigrated right at the beginning of the story. They come across a group of slaves who conveniently transform into followers with powers that conveniently prove useful, including storage abilities. Coincidentally, they also meet the young Pyrrha, Ruby, and Yang.

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I'll try my best to slow down the pace the best I can but I have never been one that's good with pacing.

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