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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv41yr
2023-09-24 15:19

Well , good concept just not good enough characters . It has few Chinese fanfic trademarks which I guess are expected from a MTL translation. Our mc is simply a uncharismatic , who just asks pokemon to be with him and they just agree (not all of them). This story itself is very much system dependent which is a minus for me. Our mc is also lazy and does everything to avoid hardwork. Pokemon battles aren't interesting enough as well. And i guess there aren't any female lead which is another disappointment . This is all after I've read 100 chapters . I guess i can try to read another 100 chapters . Of there is any improvement then , I'll delete this review .

I’m the Owner of the Pokémon Day Care In the World of Pokémon

bearnard_bear97
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1369 Chs

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ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4

Soo is there no improvement or did you not finish the next 100 chapters?😅

1yr
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LORD_GIRATINA_jr
LORD_GIRATINA_jrLv4

could be both, like he removed it from his library or forgot about this story all together

ALEX1402:Soo is there no improvement or did you not finish the next 100 chapters?😅
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TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

No female interest is dumb..just a single.virgin weeb loser honestly..what is a he a monk his whole life..dumb when people do this in stories..doesn't have be all romance but just nothing is boring af..

1yr

Skyguy345
Skyguy345Lv4

Overall, Daycare Owner is extremely difficult to read with a main character who has shown themselves to be an unlikable sociopathic Mary Sue. If you do decide to pick up this fanfiction, then I wish you luck in deciphering the numerous grammar and word usage mistakes.Otherwise, it updates frequently. Updating stability should not be a factor when reviewing a story, and as such, I am giving it the average score.

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Voidarth
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Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read

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S3GSS
S3GSSLv4

i saw this and decided to share this and hope you liked it

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Rin_
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Just nice slow life wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Xare for pokemon why not Ololoololololsjssndidndjx Jsejeu Sjssusu Shsjsj

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Waffles214
Waffles214Lv4

Pretty good story with translation that gets better the farther you read. Really good update stability and a Mc that isn’t the annoying Chinese young master type. Keep up the good work👍🏻

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love the story.. one of the best translation I have seen on this app

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