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its written well. i got to chapter 25 but the downsides started to outweigh the positives of the story imo. too many disgustingly broken au elements, the mc is too strong too early. the mc starts roleplaying as a shelby and an evil wizard from the lord of the rings, honestly its just cringe most of the time. just try to imagine an 11 year old acting this way and you would just laugh at how cringe it is. anyway, the au elements didnt add to the story, just made it worse in my opinion. personally i think this is a 1 or 2 star, but its written well and if you like heavy au with an op mc this might be for you

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

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