This is one of the best bleach fan fic that i read so far. The story pacing is good and progression is great and consistent release so far. No major grammar mistakes. Hopefully this story goes till the end

I couldn't really stand to read the story since it feels robotic. The writing style appears to be chatgptd up, and it ruins any charm that the story may have had pre-translation. The background is Bleach, so I mean, it should be top tier. The characters feel wrong because of the roboticness as you'd expect. All of them sound like the same person. The story seemed to be heading in the right direction, but I won't put myself through reading it further. Maybe I'll check later chapters at some point to see if this was fixed, but the start of the story is one of the most important, and this one dropped the ball.

Well story is progressing quite good . Writing is somewhat good but sometimes feels unnatural and little generic. Author said that he wanted to bring human qualities which is perfectly fine but exploration of human emotions and their complexities can be much more delved into . But I guess I can continue to read it . I feel like as time progresses authors writing skill will improve and the story as well. Good luck to the author.

Compared to other bleach fan-fiction, the writing quality of this story is great, coupled with how they write their characters being okay allowing me to earnestly follow the plot. So far I am enjoying the story very much what with the character development and interactions going on currently and the frequent update schedule. I appreciate your hard work author and I thank you for the chapters yet to come.

I notice the inconsistencies of the timeline and some character's appearance, also MC's way spoiling Aizen's plan ruined it for me.

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i have really enjoyed this fic so far keep up the great job.

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finely a good bleach fan fiction and especially that sui feng is the love interest