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FangYuan1234Author5mth
2024-11-01 13:04

This was my first attempt at writing a book. The plot is a bit confusing, it's full of AI, the power system is a mess and many other things. I'm currently rewriting the first 30 chapters or so, and after that it should be more enjoyable to read. The good points are - the MC (Fang Yuan wannabe) and the plot I guess, since cannon gets derailed early on. That's all folks.

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