This was my first attempt at writing a book. The plot is a bit confusing, it's full of AI, the power system is a mess and many other things. I'm currently rewriting the first 30 chapters or so, and after that it should be more enjoyable to read. The good points are - the MC (Fang Yuan wannabe) and the plot I guess, since cannon gets derailed early on. That's all folks.

Don't get me wrong I love evil Mc novels but this is like it is written by a newbie author in dark situations mc suddenly starts saying out of place juxtaposes and under tone comedy meanwhile I have no problem with the rest of the story telling it is quite good but tell you what the forced comedy just dosent suit dark novels and if you think I am wrong see the top 50 novels of our time you won't find comedy in them because it's so out of theme. I hope you improve author I like evil mcs so I will be following your next novel

😂😂😂 mc isn't like Fang Yuan he is more of a spectral soul with the brain of Fang Yuan. Don't get me wrong he is awesome 💯💯💯 would definitely recommend it 😂😂😂 can't believe the clown 🤡🤡🤡 face almost tricked me I hope there will be no heroine no romance and be more of dark style.

Other than quotation marks being missing, replaced with something else, or in weird spots, the story is good.

I recommend for those wanting a evil mc 😁

It is a good work with great potential and principle this work can be made endless. Although I still completely do not understand the personality of gg, I already like what I see. And another very important thing, there is no system or something similar like an artificial intilec like Lane's, and I hope it won't, because I want him to work on everything himself.

Great (evil alignment) mc, and proper worldbuilding for the magic system and other original aspects. Negary's shenanigans and scheming are quite fun to observe.

the only problem is that the metaphors are long winded other than that everything else is great

I've just read Chapter 74, well, it's quite a complex work, here you don't see that the main character fights and just gets stronger, here the author explains quite a lot and it definitely loads the brain, and then there are the internal conversations of the main character of the blogger, which he comes to certain conclusions. In general, I advise you to read it if you are tired of nonsense. But if you have read only a couple of novels and the most difficult of it is The Warrior God Asura, well, then I do not advise you to read it, you will burn your brain, so I will advise you to go and read the classics, for example, the madness of the reverend read at least 500 chapters. Also, English is not my first language, so there may be misunderstandings and spelling mistakes.

i had this novel in my collection from day 1 and waiting for chapters to stock and am really glad I did. I just finished ch15 and really liked the novel hope you continue it and keep up the good work