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2023-12-06 08:07

Hey autor-San, are you planning a face-slapping whit that princess? Or some kind of redemption arc? When will the misunderstanding of eden intent of rp will end?

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Noob6_writer9
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[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]

leisuresleep_35
leisuresleep_35Lv3

ok author ! don't make her part of harem pls ok

machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Só you will go full on the drama route with her?

Noob6_writer9:[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]
Nick_Alex
Nick_AlexLv4

if she has a Redemption arc then i believe she should be in the Haremno reason to keep hating someone and not giving them a chance and all

Noob6_writer9:[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]
Nick_Alex
Nick_AlexLv4

why tho?she shows something most people doesn't care aboutregret and accepting the fact that she is evil for what she didwhy not accept her in the Harem?if she was truly an Evil Psychopath she would brag and mock our MC but no she shows promiseif the Redemption arc is done good enough she should be in the Harem

leisuresleep_35:ok author ! don't make her part of harem pls ok
Sami_jake
Sami_jakeLv4

Make her regrets ever being born, make her realize her mistake and drown her in regrets. make her life miserable!!

Noob6_writer9:[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]
Omori101
Omori101Lv14

because author already said Eden wouldn't forgive her so why would he have someone in his harem when he dislikes said person and won't forgive/trust them. why should we add her? what would be the reasoning in that? imagine that someone like her betrayed you in life, and a few years because you became someone and you achieved something in life, she starts feeling regret. Even if she already kind of regretted it she still made that decision so why should she be added to the harem now? because she had a redemption arc and she feels regret? I still wouldn't forgive.

Nick_Alex:why tho?she shows something most people doesn't care aboutregret and accepting the fact that she is evil for what she didwhy not accept her in the Harem?if she was truly an Evil Psychopath she would brag and mock our MC but no she shows promiseif the Redemption arc is done good enough she should be in the Harem
Omori101
Omori101Lv14

I understand what you mean with if the redemption arc is done well she could still become a character on that's in a positive relationship with Eden the decision she did to take her country over Eden still shows where her priorities lie... for me that's just: okay you like the country more than me? alright then let's end it here you can have your country and I won't get in your way. I don't see a point in adding her to the harem.

Nick_Alex:why tho?she shows something most people doesn't care aboutregret and accepting the fact that she is evil for what she didwhy not accept her in the Harem?if she was truly an Evil Psychopath she would brag and mock our MC but no she shows promiseif the Redemption arc is done good enough she should be in the Harem
Omori101
Omori101Lv14

i meant while I understand*...

Omori101:I understand what you mean with if the redemption arc is done well she could still become a character on that's in a positive relationship with Eden the decision she did to take her country over Eden still shows where her priorities lie... for me that's just: okay you like the country more than me? alright then let's end it here you can have your country and I won't get in your way. I don't see a point in adding her to the harem.
DayNightTwilight04
DayNightTwilight04Lv3

Just move her out of the story like side character without killing her of course, make a good ending for her author san plzz.

Noob6_writer9:[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]
DayNightTwilight04
DayNightTwilight04Lv3

It's not like I hate her or anything, it's good she listened to her parents back then, you can't find a person like her who would choose her parents and people over her lover 'that what you call true heroine', but that's it. Leave her be she can't be trusted nor can she be loved cause she betrayed a man who was ready to destroy the world for her.

Noob6_writer9:[No face-slapping.][Yes, she has a redemption arc, and there is a little bit of misunderstanding.][Will Eden forgive her? No.][Will she be in the harem?][Depends on the reader's response after her redemption arc, I have three potential routes ready for her: two bad ones and a good one. I will decide after seeing the response what route to go with as her presence is crucial for the plot.]
Dark_Shadow_4384
Dark_Shadow_4384Lv3

Finally someone who get's it.

DayNightTwilight04:It's not like I hate her or anything, it's good she listened to her parents back then, you can't find a person like her who would choose her parents and people over her lover 'that what you call true heroine', but that's it. Leave her be she can't be trusted nor can she be loved cause she betrayed a man who was ready to destroy the world for her.
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