When Author put "English is not my first language" in the synopsis.

Well this is it for me guys. 90+ chapters with no supernatural elements. I really wanted to like this, but it took like 20 or so chapters for the author to forget this version of hachiman had a system. It took 75 chapters for me to almost give up. And this is me officially throwing in the towel. Thanks, its well written (mostly) but not my kind of novel Writing quality: 5 Stability of updates: 5 Story development: 3* Character design: 2** World background: 2*** *the story went in a boring direction. If you are going to merge in system elements at least have the decency to world hop or merge supernatural type stories. The only saving grace is hachiman publishing whats basically a better version of a story that shall remain unnamed. ** although hachiman is fleshed out as a character, most others are not. *** author forgot about the system. Author adds saeko busujima but she barely acts like her. Some soma(food wars) elements. Including the gods tongue and academy. After 2 chapters this is barely mentioned at all.

So this is my review till chapter 70: 1st of all I didn’t like that the MC is Hachiman I prefer original character from the author of the fanfic. 2nd the system it is not bad, but the MC does not use it very well he didn’t try to get new skills like business, computer, medical or survival if that was the case, I would’ve liked the author to limit the amount of skills that he can get or allocate the amount of point to his prefer category. 3rd the internal monologue is a lot and the MC mainly talk with girls he does not have male friend except one I think. 4th the conversations feel a little stiff and sometime forced. Finally the baiting it is OK to do it once, but personally, I don’t like it example “you think he will kiss her now and then someone will bust him or he refuse an invitation from his Senpai to take a shower together” you have to keep in mind that the MC is a 15 or 16-year-old so he is raging hormones. Ps: it is a good read, but it leaves a lot to be desired.

Personally I was expecting something different and better sadly I was disappointed. Some people might like this FF but personally its not for me

In order to connect to the harem, the main character is very indecisive coward and cannot make his point properly. He keeps saying he's a gentleman, but he keeps the girls at bay. Finally, we were able to make some progress in the 120th chapter. But until that chapter, i broke away from the fanfic. Time skips.. I don't like time skips. We missed the character interactions because of this time skip. The parents are non-existent. I mean, don't you ever worry about your kids? Why don't you call them on the phone? Your kid's in a tournament. Why don't you call and congratulate him? There's a lot more I could list, but I don't want to tire myself out any more. The only positive thing I'll say is his relationship with his little sister Komachi, for her sake I raise the rating and give 3*. WQ:3 SoU:5 SD:2 CD:2 WB:3

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well if you like a generic dance harem protag that is a reincarnated person from our world... I liked it at the beginning when he decided to get a harem and not be as dance as the original MC and treat the girls better than the original. But Instead, you slowly turn him into a dance beta protag that doesn't have the nads to make moves on girls. Instead, he lets them walk all over him.

My review up to the 4th chapter! for me the story is very good, there are no mistakes in writing, and it is constantly being updated, but I don't know if the author will keep this pace, but as long as it is updated daily or weekly for me it's great!

Good premise. the level of English definitely hurts the story but you are warned of that. the only problem I see is that the original MC is definitely better than this mc. in every single way. hes kinda creepy too. his system is extra boring as well.