Ok, the beginning is just meh. The whole, 3 wishes yada yada. One of the weakest methods to give your character power is giving them wishes. Just throw your MC into the situation, no explanation with the relevant power popping up when needed. The whole wish thing has been over done and this one doesn't make it special in any way. The actual story is alright, but nothing to write home about.
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