Item: Marvel: Become a slime
Rating: 1.2
Author: CitricGunner

CitricGunnerLv16mth

2024-11-13 10:38

Lacking a good bit of detail. Whether its about his skills acquired via reincarnation, the skills from devouring robots(???), and just how they work like magic perception in a world with no magicules and all things so far run on physics. Meaning it is not something that pops up on the radar. Direction is a bit wacky, not really much of anything. No high stakes really and the story's direction with the mental suggestions(more like brainwashing to me) the Mc is under so to become more feminine isn't really to my taste. It feels worse considering that his feminization is basically self sabotage by his skill Great Sage, and if it were great sage from Canon, she wouldn't have made such a rookie mistake that would cost her master dearly. I don't mind a female rimuru just not 1 who is brainwashed to be 1.

Marvel: Become a slime

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