Writing quality: while there are some problems it is readable, also it’s double spaced and has next to no author notes so I give it 4 stars Updates: so far as of chap 27 there is at least one chapter a day so 5 stars Story development: I personally like it, however there is some problems. Though I have noticed that the author has changed some things as I have reread this story(the changes are plot holes and other things like that.). So 4 stars Character design: I feel the original characters are quite good though some need more scenes(Naraku) as for marvel characters for the most part they have similar personalities to what I imagine. 4 stars World background: It’s marvel….. So far it’s can’t really comment much on the original background so I will just base this off marvel and give it a 5 Overall it’s a 4.4 Hope my review helps those who want to read. Note: the main character gender sorta changes? I mean te main character goes from he to they then slowly identifys as a girl. So if you do like gender bender or anything similar don’t read.
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