Review Detail of Dante_Spardason in Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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If you are looking for a realistic apocalypse story you are sadly in the wrong place, mutating zombies are acceptable and mutating humans but godlike ability is too much. The pacing feels terrible, the story needed to slowdown in terms of relationship progression. Chap 40 and they are already married. Too much timeskips, unrealistic goals being met in too short of a timeframe. MC not cautious enough despite literally saying in the story that he has eye opening experience as songming on the nature of people. Female leads are bland and does not have character depth, and by my current chapter no character development.
Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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thank you for the review. I'll take this feedback into consideration as a improvement to get better. As for why its so fast pace, its because its an apocalypse. Why wait when you might never get to see tomorrow? And as for mutanting human,the only mutating human is MC. I would say its more just a superpower, not really mutating human in groups etc. yeah the female lead are a little bland, sorry about that. First time writing and didnt add enough depths. As for why Xiaoyun didnt grow up as much, Songming experience is more of a dream. Would you treat your dream and remember it fully?