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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv37mthGabichu_Yeah

I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

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Caio_Lacerda
Caio_LacerdaLv13Caio_Lacerda

Since you find webnovel novels to be of low quality, where else do you read novels?

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Ohh, I understand, that's why I felt the artificial and robotic sensation, don't worry, the same thing happens to me when I want to express myself in English, obviously I don't speak English as my main language either, I speak Spanish which is more expressive therefore when writing English I have to limit my expressiveness so that it doesn't sound strange in English. You can still edit the first chapters, if you ever do let me know and I will change the review and put one appropriate to the rewrite.

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Idk, I don't remember

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Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

Royalroad.com, wuxiaworld.com and Amazon.com has better novels.

Caio_Lacerda:Since you find webnovel novels to be of low quality, where else do you read novels?