I like the story idea. But the characterisation and the granmar isn’t the best. Honestly it feels like a translated mtl 😂. Still, in my opinion, it would be a whole lot better with better atleast better grammar. The characterisation doesn’t matter as much since it’s a fanfiction, but it would be nice to have it as close as possible to their original version— your choice.
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LIKESasuke_Uchia_9985:definitely mtl I'm a connoisseur of mtl if this isn't mtl I'll knowtow 200 times
Sasuke_Uchia_9985:definitely mtl I'm a connoisseur of mtl if this isn't mtl I'll knowtow 200 times
Sasuke_Uchia_9985:definitely mtl I'm a connoisseur of mtl if this isn't mtl I'll knowtow 200 times
Sasuke_Uchia_9985:definitely mtl I'm a connoisseur of mtl if this isn't mtl I'll knowtow 200 times
I checked this is mtl and the author still has no shame in asking money while stealing another work probably why the name trash.
Sasuke_Uchia_9985:definitely mtl I'm a connoisseur of mtl if this isn't mtl I'll knowtow 200 times
Kami_Aberra:I checked this is mtl and the author still has no shame in asking money while stealing another work probably why the name trash.