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_KONLv1210mth
2024-02-12 11:40

To put it bluntly, it's not written well. Some parts of the writing feel smooth and feel like they're going somewhere then most of it is just here, over there, and everywhere. Leaves quite a lot to be desired. Like I wish the development of the family was more of a bigger focus. I'm not seeing or feeling the development there. Instead it's mostly a multi crossover, school, slice of life story. <- [I don't actually know if this bit could be considered a spoiler, but I'll mark it just in case.] BUT! By turning off my brain and reading it, I'd say that this story is alright. I like the idea. I like the Russian stuff. I don't normally like multiple crossovers, but turning off brain made me an absolute beast, capable of overlooking all of my gripes. Under normal circumstances!? I wouldn't have read all of what was available to me from this. But I did. I wouldn't be saving this to come back to. But I am. Because it's admittedly fun.

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