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Lord_Rings
Lord_RingsLv41yr
2023-08-15 23:27

I like it story it is tooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooood hope pls don't drop it

Hitman x Family

Livice
4.8
80 Chs

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ShifuLong
ShifuLongLv3

I'm not going to lie, I didn't read it, but I'm giving it 5 stars just for that impressive synopsis, I think it's the most compelling synopsis I've read in any webnovel, it really draws you in to read the story.

1yr

ItsNotTheMoon
ItsNotTheMoonLv14

Greatest of all time. Zenith of the medium. Hallmark of media. Gold standard of storytelling. Apogee of creativity. Vertex of invention. Crest of ingenuity. Acme of imagination. Pinnacle of innovation. Epic of epics. Legend among legends. Peak fiction. The only problem I can find is that it’s too adictive so you may find yourself depressed if there’s no more chapters.

1yr
shaluxifa
shaluxifaLv2

before i read i hope ayna still here

1yr
therealet
therealetLv4

Review made as of chapter 8. Highly recommend reading this. Writing Quality, 4*: The only complaints I have are nitpicks, there are typos here and there, mistakes with English sayings, and the MC has done some things of questionable intelligence but they are things that won't come back to bite him anyways so it's entirely harmless. Some scenes can come off as awkward, but in a charming way that just makes you like the story more. Fantastically written otherwise, eloquent usage of words, and very palatable sentence structure that makes it smooth to read. Stability of Updates, 5*: One chapter every 2 days(ish), written with high-quality, zero complaints here. Story Development, 5*: Paced to my liking and crossovers are intelligently connected into the plotline creating a nice experience while reading. Character Design, 3.5* (rounded to four): The author's OC's are great, though when trying to compare some characters to their counterpart in their respective series' it comes off a little stiff and the experience is much easier if you just treat them like their own character and don't compare them. Considering that point I'm curious as to why the author took the fanfiction route given that this story can stand just fine on it's own two feet. World Background, 5*: Don't quite know how to judge this category all that well but I'll give what I got. The author has done a really good job of meshing the background of the story with the perspectives of the main characters, the world feels like it moves on it's own without them which does a great job at helping your immersion with this story; that is also a massive hurdle for writers to get over I have found so lots of applause there.

1yr
elisha1_
elisha1_Lv1

so far, so good ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

1yr
Livice
LiviceAuthor

well well well, I followed the cliche by reviewing my own book

1yr
its_mika
its_mikaLv2

Personally, I like the idea that the author is implementing, I hope and can continue this and not stay halfway (I don't speak much English so I don't know if I wrote something wrong haha)

1yr
VirginYoungMaster
VirginYoungMasterLv4

This young master wants more! Commoner ! Heed my command or I will make you see you ancestors today!

1yr
Income_Tax
Income_TaxLv4

writing quality is so fucking good. the story is excellent though it is still in its early stages, let's see in the future. Character has soul! He is not the typical edgy MC you see in most assassin/hitman FFs/Novel/Manga/Anime. I recommend reading this 👌

1yr
The_Nameless_360
The_Nameless_360Lv3

Where is (The System Won't Work Unless I Have Girlfriends)?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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