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HaremsR3vil
HaremsR3vilLv131yr
2023-08-19 10:13

The story is ridiculously repetitive. Mentions the MC’s honor and sense of justice every other paragraph. So much happens in the story yet nothing really happens at all. Important events happen and nothing is explained. It’s just mentioned that it happened. Dialogue is a mess as well. Like seriously, its always unwavering determination for justice this. Shining beacon of blah blah blah that. Story could have been good but I felt like I was really just rereading the same chapter over and over

The Son of Marvel

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Duke_of_Insanity
Duke_of_InsanityLv14

it the same as every other one, mc has powers and joins shield for no reason everything else is the same no originality at all

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SixPathSage
SixPathSageLv14

It's honestly not a bad light novel. no massive grammar issues idk about how often they update but it seems daily for right now. My biggest gripe and why I gave it 3 stars on writing quality is the unbelievable amount of repetition on the Mcs honor and how hes a symbol of justice and what not. Dont get me wrong I dont mind a heroic mc but jeez its every. single. chapter. where its brought up multiple times and it just got unbearable for me. I stopped on ch.24 idk if it continues after that but I hope someone else can enjoy this novel

1yr
GoldenIsles
GoldenIslesLv14

writing quality is somewhat good(grammar and punctuations) but author could have been more descriptive about the story elements(background, characters, actions, ect...), because of that i felt like floating/breezing through the story with no immersion. And story threads and timelines are kinda messed up, as sometimes it confuses while reading. and there is no worldbuilding at all.

1yr
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

I don't understand the good grades, it lacks realism, people lack consistency, (I'm talking about the famous duo of the shield) the explanations requested by the shields are not really explained, in fact not explained at all. and the age of the hero is not mentioned after chapter 1 oh no again it's never mentioned... a lot of info is missing, everything is skimmed over. I think it's written with the help of an AI or else the person doesn't really like the story and the bacle.

1yr
Devajyoti_Gogoi
Devajyoti_GogoiLv4

Love it🔥🔥🔥...............................

1yr
Artem_5195
Artem_5195Lv2

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1yr
UnlimitedRage
UnlimitedRageAuthor

The MC is 15 years old if there is any confusion.

1yr
UnlimitedRage
UnlimitedRageAuthor

To ever that is reading this little story thank you. I am writing this to get a better understanding on how to approach writing any kind of story. The first 27 chapters I know I messed up a lot, I am trying something different for the later chapters. I am going to start having the Mc get away from the plot of the hero’s of earth. It’ s going to be him and the wide open universe and a date with Thanos.

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