The story to me seems to be pretty fleshed out, you used essences in the story which Is beautiful to me, and the pacing isn’t to fast or too slow which is perfect as you can bring out a characters development. I love the novel
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LIKEAh bro your comment got shadowbanned but I got the notification and checked your profile and saw it. fantastic
EzioAuditore_1:You can't see it right now, but I have a big smile that you guys enjoy my story. I know it's not great, nor maybe not even good, but I am happy that you guys are enjoying it.