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Item: Atonement's Path
Rating: 4.6

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Reviewing at chapter 34: The atmosphere of this story is captured pretty well, the details about the souls screaming in agony and the hollow darkness that surrounded them was something that was actually engaging. The main issue I have is remembering who's who here....like the names Titan 5, Titan 6 and Titan 7 don't exactly stand out.

Atonement's Path

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That's really a foreshadowing tho. Basically if you find something unexplainable or confusing, there's a chance that it might be a foreshadowing for something in my novel. Anyways, thanks for rating.

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