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Lv31yr
2023-09-17 01:35

It's an amazing story! I've only read five chapters, but it's already captivating. I plan to keep reading. I've noticed that the paragraphs are quite lengthy. It's just a suggestion, but breaking them into smaller paragraphs could enhance the reading experience for others.

Atonement's Path

FriedrichFriedrice
4.8
35 Chs

Liked it!

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FriedrichFriedrice
FriedrichFriedriceAuthor

Thank you, I'll also try reading yours too when I'm not busy.

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Interesting story. The plot is interesting. The storyline is enough to make me curious. However, I think it's only chapter 6 that I think is quite mindblowing.As long as it can create an unexpected scene and make the reader curious, I think that's enough.good job, author!!

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Reviewing at chapter 34: The atmosphere of this story is captured pretty well, the details about the souls screaming in agony and the hollow darkness that surrounded them was something that was actually engaging. The main issue I have is remembering who's who here....like the names Titan 5, Titan 6 and Titan 7 don't exactly stand out.

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Wow. I would have never come up with this. You have a great fantasy and if I see great work I tell this to the person. I have seen much but this is so great that I don't have the words for it. Keep the good work up.

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from the start of the book, you get hooked at the pages, dragging you for more and more. The author has a lot of talent that can be seen in his words. The writing style and back ground setting plus the character designing all are written like professionals. No clue how he does that but this a rare talents of writing. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. Keep it up!

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I love all the villain characters in the story! I believe our tastes align in this regard. Therefore, it's practically impossible for me to give a low rating to the story. May the evil protagonists continue to reign forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😈👑

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