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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv41yr
2023-09-20 11:16

The book has great potential. The story builds a world and then connects two characters from two completely different spectrums of society. This is the classic collision of social status. I loved the story..I hope the author keeps writing till the end...I will cheer you on! It is a good read, indeed.

Atonement's Path

FriedrichFriedrice
4.8
35 Chs

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FriedrichFriedrice
FriedrichFriedriceAuthor

bro I know that the last time you checked my novel was months ago but can you try to read it now because I rewrote the whole novel

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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4

let me check..by the way do you need a review too?

FriedrichFriedrice:bro I know that the last time you checked my novel was months ago but can you try to read it now because I rewrote the whole novel
1yr
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FriedrichFriedrice
FriedrichFriedriceAuthor

Kindly, Yes

ToufiqUlAlam:let me check..by the way do you need a review too?
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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4

okay

FriedrichFriedrice:Kindly, Yes
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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4

okay, I keep reading and then review it.

1yr
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