Review Detail of SIN3 in Cursed Path to Immortality

I remember that there was a novel with the same story or idea, but I read a few of them and a good number of chapters, but I regretted it, as the world building was very poor (and you know that what makes novels distinctive is mostly world building), and the main character relied on the aura of luck in order to get out From the crises, the writer was wasting many chapters to no avail, and the writer was making great enemies for the hero from the beginning of the story, and this is a disgusting thing. You are a novel writer. You have to make me, the reader, relax at the beginning of your novel until you see that everyone has adapted to the novel and then you begin to delve deeper. I hope the writer of this novel heeds my advice. Do not make the main character a magnet for problems (make him the problem for his enemies), whether it is in a small or large amount. Make him integrate into society as if he were a person you would find on any street. Also, focus on building the world with a very great focus, and finally make the main character fight or provoke enemies of the same size as him And his strength This is the conclusion of my statement.💙