Choka
Being Weak is a Sin. Both mentally and physically, Both in real life and novels.
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Choka3mthReplied to justAanimefan- Choka5mthReplied to MarkuKing
How is it brilliant, he could have just used it on five random people and got his item already.
"Lose a part of themselves... Does the item have to be so vague? Anyway, considering it's a cursed item, it won't be good to use it on my allies. But wait a second, aren't there five disciples I need to return the favor to? Ah, yes, I think I've already found my sacrifices." Raze smiled. - Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Maybe đ
Hell, Dean didn't even feel his presence till the young man finally decided to speak up. - Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Relics yes, I won't spoil by saying what kind of abilities or relics they have.
' Hm? Test partner? Why didn't that tablet inform me of such a thing.' Dean was greatly dazed and suspicious of the young man as he pondered the words he just heard through,' Doesn't this also mean he is someone armed with a sacred relic of the primordial era! Is it also a book like the one I got or something else?' - Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 29 Confrontation? Wasn't that easy?
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 1 Final Method
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 26 Diving for the First Time.
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 2 Resolve
- Choka5mthReplied to SIN3
I'll do my best to create a solid world for this novel. The MC will also not rely on the aura of luck and the child of heaven or whatever those novels are. The main character is even chilling at the beginning of the novel till the current chapter, and even though some problems were here and there, it was none that he couldn't deal with and was well explained. His opponents won't be gods or overly powered characters that he will win against with luck or some item he looted somewhere a month ago so rest assured on that part. I hope you enjoy your read and honestly tell me what you think about the current 30 chapters in a comment. Thanks for the honest review.
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 30 Diversity.
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 30 Diversity.
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 30 Diversity.
- Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Character development keep in mind, he was in earth a week ago or so. But he won't be like this for long dw m, it won't be annoying haha.
" I'm very sad," Dean uttered again as he took a step closer to Blank. - Choka5mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Keep in mind Dean is still kind of attached to his past self and humanity it will be explained anyway, just part of the character development.
Blank's knees failed to keep her lifeless body up as it immediately fell to the ground generating a loud sound.