Review Detail of Tabs_Kebriel in Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
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Poor Atticus, overestimating himself like that, hopefully he wont make the same mistake in the future.Anyway, i must say after reading the first chapter, this book has some potential, I love how everything is detailed, but i think it still needs a lot of improvements, the mc must use its 5 senses to describe its surroundings, sight, touch, smell, auditory, etc² anyway keep up the good work!!
Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I'm delighted to hear that you found potential in the first chapter of the book. Your insight is invaluable, and I appreciate your constructive criticism. You're absolutely right; immersing the reader in the story through the protagonist's senses is a crucial aspect of storytelling. I'll take your advice to heart and work on enhancing the sensory descriptions to make the world even more vivid and engaging. Your encouragement means a lot, and I'm committed to refining the narrative to create a more captivating experience. Stay tuned for further developments, and thank you for your support!