Thank you bro!!

You'll see :DDD

Thank you so much, I'll keep in mind to work more harder in writing this story!

It depends if I have free time, I've been busy at school lately. Sorry

The mc would carve out his own kingdom some time later in the story, and the early chapters would focus on the mc adapting to the new world.

I apologize, but I've decided to stop working on it. The writing and plot don't seem to meet my expectations and my new standards, and it feels like something a naive 12-year-old would write. Don't worry, in my new story, I've already decided to incorporate crime organization building in here, it's one of the many things I will include that would help the mc's rise to power. But the pacing is a bit slow, so it's going to be a long time before you'll see some exciting stuff.

Thanks! :D

done!

I will!

That's a secret hehe

Author here! shamelessly writing a review on his own book. ANYWAY, after my 'hibernation', I'm finally back.. back with new ideas, inspiration, and motivation... which led me in writing this story. I know I made a lot of incomplete stories before... BUT I SWEAR TO GOD I'M NOT GOING TO DISAPPOINT YOU IN THIS ONE. I PROMISE. I already have an entire plot planned before I even wrote the prologue.. so no chance on me dropping everything. So if you have any questions, feel free to ask!!

bro :o

What do u think?

I'm going to keep it as a secret, but there will be events that will change the mc's personality and morals. I hope you will trust me on this, I won't let my readers down. I promise

Although I was confused at the occasional pov change at the first, I think the story has potential, the writing style, plot, and settings are not bad, anyway keep it up

I've finished the prologue, not bad, although a few grammatical erros here and there, the writing style is good, the settings is also unique, especially the plot, anyway i approve it 10/10

Poor Atticus, overestimating himself like that, hopefully he wont make the same mistake in the future.Anyway, i must say after reading the first chapter, this book has some potential, I love how everything is detailed, but i think it still needs a lot of improvements, the mc must use its 5 senses to describe its surroundings, sight, touch, smell, auditory, etc² anyway keep up the good work!!

I must say, this book has caught my attention because of its unique plot, its not everyday you could stumble upon a novel as quite as good as this, though it needs a few improvements, anyway keep up the good work

a group of large ugly green abominations being lovey dovey with each other?... very unromantic and unlikely... Well anyways, let's see about that...

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