Review Detail of war_fox in Fate/Juggernaut
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this is a hot mess. the author has no idea what what they’re doing and is guessing/making-up everything as they go. they have no understanding of what the characters are like personality wise not skill wise, yet says they are “correcting” canon. they dont even understand that MEDICS would NOT be what KNIGHTS call for medic aid. they call for HEALERS. The author also said they were going to be accurate to both Fate (the series) and history. yet they dont even know the basics of either. so no i dont recommend reading this.
Fate/Juggernaut
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I'm sorry you feel that way. I haven't gotten a chance to rewrite the prologue, as I'm taking care of my wife, and I am too excited to write the next Arc of the story (the rewrite will happen after that) I hope you find a book that checks all your boxes, and I hope you might consider giving this novel another chance when the first 11 chapters or so have been rewritten. I would encourage you to read the chapters from 11 or 12 on (I can't remember the exact chapter where the prologue ends) and tell me what you think of those, as they deal with Holy Grail Wars and such. Thank you for the honest review! i hope in the future you check to see if the rewrite is better, but if you still feel the same way, i understand. I appreciate you taking the time to read my novel, and I understand that it may not be for everyone. Thank you!
