Review Detail of ShadowGovernment in Fate/Juggernaut

Item: Fate/Juggernaut
Rating: 5

Review detail

ShadowGovernmentLv141mthShadowGovernment

10/10 The best author I've ever come across. ;) Some things are admittedly a bit forced at times but it doesn't matter as the progression more than makes up for it.

Fate/Juggernaut

greenbaypitbull

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greenbaypitbullAuthorgreenbaypitbull

thank you so much for the review! what things do you feel are a bit forced? I'd like to know, so that way I can work on them in the future to improve my writing!

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ShadowGovernmentLv14ShadowGovernment

Mainly just the power scaling seems a bit off as it feels like he was really strong when fighting goons but as seen with his fight with Aang he seemed really weak compared to how he was depicted. making it seem almost forced at times.[img=recommend]

greenbaypitbull:thank you so much for the review! what things do you feel are a bit forced? I'd like to know, so that way I can work on them in the future to improve my writing!
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