Here I am with the usual 5 star review. If you have any questions regarding this fic, feel free to ask here. Any typos, let me know and I will fix them.

The problem with murder is that everyone is a hypocrite, first of all no one has the right to demand that someone kill another person if they don't want to, second it's a law, if you don't like it, get political and change the law, don't worry. complain like a spoiled brat thirdly there are places where it's legal but the rest of the world doesn't imitate them for a reason don't you think? and fourthly there are people who are allowed to kill but nobody wants to go this way as it takes away the fun of believe they are god

It's good overall, in the beginning it's kind of confusing and irritating but once you get into it you'll get hooked. Like getting a burger in some back alley dinner, it may seem stupid and sketchy but it's soooooo good. Give it a try!

I feel like your writing still doesn’t work well for books. I’m not saying your writing is bad, but feels more like a script/storyboard to a tv show (the whole alien scene as an example).

Too much edge tbh. The tone of the chapters and characters sometimes don't match with each other.

On one hand, superheroes, always a fan when people take that genre and tries their own take on it, but on the other hand...I'm not sure where I would stand on this whole harem, no-harem debate, but hey I trust you know what you're doing

Starting was really good, as the author didn't rush and took things step by step. And it takes place in DCU, which is one of my fav. The thing is people are torn apart by harem or no-harem. Even the harem lovers are having second thoughts. Keep it up.

I just read the first chapter, and the plot was actually simple. But, it was executed properly. The dialogues were good, but what stands out we're the details on each paragraphs .

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