Item: Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
Rating: 3.2
Author: Fickle_as_light

Fickle_as_lightLv41yr

2024-03-04 22:41

man a honest review, i like the book but author you have to remeber that this is not a si so i sugest read a few of your previous chapters before writing. One thing i can say is that jin is inconsistant with his character and has dementia. like man was supposed to be the guy who is a family man but in hotel transilvenia he started behaving like those pokemon harem mc who just try to get new girls for the shake of it, like they feel its a sport and they are hunting women instead of animal

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

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As the author of this fanfic, I have the right to rate it myself. 'Oh mAh GoD, AuThOr. YeR FenFiC is TrASh!!'

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I have no idea why this has such a high rating, The premiss has potential but the execution was just horrendous.

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The cover attracted me. XD

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Orsted_samaLv3

Protagonist is over-Dramatic... And who curses in front of God you say it? Isn't it bit too illogical and carefree... It just shown in the first episode the protagonist has a shy and humble personality... After meeting God he becomes carefree? Curse wherever he wants? Looks every where like it's not a big deal? Don't know about others this is not for me...

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SorriasLv5

You really, REALLY need a beta reader...

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GreenDragoLv4

I like it so far its cool.

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Red_SpiceLv4

Reveal spoiler

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HumbuubLv4

I read your other works, and they mostly have good premise, but just like a child excited to share a story, you tend to blurt everything out at once and fail to translate what's in your head to what you wrote.

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AstarosXLv3

I really do not understand the high rating because and these reviews don't seem like bots either(many of them). I tried to read, I really did, but the forcing of every character development, the constant change of Mcs personality when he's a normal guy one second and then he runs away un fear of OOGWAY because he knew that he was from another world. Like, really? Who would be afraid of Oogeay if they hadn't done anything bad? I could literally entrust my life to the guy. He's like Uncle Iroh but a turtle.

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