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SiquiLv141yr
2023-12-27 06:24

This ff is not as bad as others I have read, but it does have many deficiencies, the MC does not have a real personality, the author changes it to suit his needs for the plot, he also tends to force the character's growth and then throw him away for a chapter after

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

SlimeSage
4.5
223 Chs

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SlimeSage
SlimeSageAuthor

As the author of this fanfic, I have the right to rate it myself. 'Oh mAh GoD, AuThOr. YeR FenFiC is TrASh!!'

1yr

JuanL
JuanLLv4

The cover attracted me. XD

1yr
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

I have no idea why this has such a high rating, The premiss has potential but the execution was just horrendous.

1yr
Orsted_sama
Orsted_samaLv3

Protagonist is over-Dramatic... And who curses in front of God you say it? Isn't it bit too illogical and carefree... It just shown in the first episode the protagonist has a shy and humble personality... After meeting God he becomes carefree? Curse wherever he wants? Looks every where like it's not a big deal? Don't know about others this is not for me...

1yr
Sorrias
SorriasLv5

You really, REALLY need a beta reader...

1yr
GreenDrago
GreenDragoLv4

I like it so far its cool.

1yr
Red_Spice
Red_SpiceLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

I read your other works, and they mostly have good premise, but just like a child excited to share a story, you tend to blurt everything out at once and fail to translate what's in your head to what you wrote.

1yr
AstarosX
AstarosXLv3

I really do not understand the high rating because and these reviews don't seem like bots either(many of them). I tried to read, I really did, but the forcing of every character development, the constant change of Mcs personality when he's a normal guy one second and then he runs away un fear of OOGWAY because he knew that he was from another world. Like, really? Who would be afraid of Oogeay if they hadn't done anything bad? I could literally entrust my life to the guy. He's like Uncle Iroh but a turtle.

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