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MehJustDie
MehJustDieLv131yr
2023-10-03 23:42

This novel is a great gem that obliged me to give a review thanks to how amazing it was. First of the MC his development is great and all the suffering he suffered and persevered through would put any MC to shame i won’t go into details as it would spoil the novel. If in was there instead of him i would have long given up. There aren’t many grammar mistakes but maybe i didn’t notice them as i have grown accustomed to MTL novels.

Omnipotent system of the Otherworld's Judge

Billurigan
4.7
102 Chs

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Billurigan
BilluriganAuthor

Thanks for the review and glad to hear you think this project of mine is good. I'm thankful that you are sympathizing with the mc but I think it is actually rather tame compared to some other characters in fiction.

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Billurigan
BilluriganAuthor

Honest review from the author ---- This is my first work and there are certainly flaws, especially in the beginning so I would appreciate it if you could overlook those for a bit if you plan to read this. I am working hard to improve and I know I am improving gradually so the novel hopefully becomes more readable as chapters go on. I have tried to avoid common tropes and cliches as much as possible although one or two were needed to make the story happen. ---System--- The system in this novel is a bit different than the classic systems. First of all, if you have read the synopsis then you would know that the system was created by the mc, albeit unintentionally, so there is no cheat system popping out of thin air. At least you would know how the system came to be. ---Useless System?--- The system would be a bit, uhh stupid in the beginning so it won't be a complete cheat yet. The system would grow alongside the mc as the story progresses. There is also this mystery of how the system became like that but that is for the future. ---Update consistency and chapter length--- I update at least once a day. The word count per chapter is a bit inconsistent as it ranges between 1k to 1.6k. A few chapters might have about 2k words but those are few and around the first 30 to 40 chaps. ---Confusing power system--- This does not mean this novel features a complex power system. The power system consists of cultivation, magic, and a universal system that everyone possesses that is referred to as the soulguide. The confusion is attributed to my poor planning as a beginner author so I will release info chapters in the auxiliary volume to help things a bit. If this may prove inconvenient to you, the reader, then I apologize. As a note, English is not my first language so yeah. I would greatly appreciate it if you give feedback. This would help me improve, and make the story more enjoyable to read and worth your time. If you have any questions about the story then ask them here. I will reply as soon as I can. 5 stars because this review was posted during a special occasion for this novel and not because I am shameless.

1yr

FreezingPoint
FreezingPointLv15

Brilliant, cant wait for more updates....

1yr
sapient
sapientLv4

the MC is not unique, he has a character of a random passerby, the plot is bad, it is not engaging, you cannot feel or understand what a character is feeling at the moment.

1yr
Goddess1ofchaos
Goddess1ofchaosLv3

Why five stars? Give it a try and agree with me, the unique plot development, character depiction, welcoming synopsis and good grammar. Everything about this novel is worth some gifts stones and collections keep it up author, am eager to find out how the story unfolds and why you assured us that the mc is not gay[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins]

1yr
Karunezune
KarunezuneLv2

Now that's a way to start, you'll be going up the rankings in no time🙏

1yr
AnimeTagz
AnimeTagzLv11

Very interesting story with an engaging plot. The character development is also well paced and the flow of the overall storyline is good.

1yr
Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorLv4

even though it is ur first work this novel is quite good. keep up the work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Steakyy
SteakyyLv11

..................................................... This is interesting ....................................................................

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bigmadtoe
bigmadtoeLv4

great.. keep writing..obviously there are some things here and there but overall it's great for a first novel. Mine sucked pretty hard lol

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