It went well until chapter 14, which is where it falls like all stories of this type. I wonder why all these protagonists need to say exactly who they are and where they came from to the good guys.

I am surprised by how genuinely good this is I for one have never seen a beast boy fanfic before. I look forward to the process you will make

No one who has advanced knowledge of Batman and DC would ever voluntarily subject themselves to his paranoid delusions or Gotham for training that can be done elsewhere.

It is a very good story, the focus of the story is adventure, development, and creativity, with a lot of interaction between characters, with an MC with a more mature personality than the bunch of mini-zeus in the webnovel, good battles and transformations not limited just to animals common, but practically all races and even aliens, like some from Ben 10 (I'm still waiting for him to turn into that alien speedster and race with Kid Flash lol), the romance is gradual and solid, starting with long-distance interactions and evolving over time. few, I'm happy to see a normal MC who isn't a walking aphrodisiac, they are very rare in the web novel. the only current problem is the MC has no clear goal, he's kind of testing the waters, still not knowing what he wants, which is understandable, but it's been 49 chap, so I hope he makes a decision and starts moving towards it quickly Anyway, I highly recommend the story, and I thank the author for the good work

It's honestly an interesting world and an interesting idea for the main character. Unfortunately, it feels undirected. The plot after 30 chapters feels like it's still finding itself, where the Mc only real goal is to explore his powers. Honestly, it misses a lot of character development moments instead of letting the Mc just stay as his previous life self, but with powers. So far the "struggles" of the Mc have basically been artificial with all the solutions handed to him or easily within arms reach. Tldr it's okay, but won't ever be considered great.

The writing is all over the place. However, if you are from English Country then maybe it can be understood. Still, it is so confusing.

It is one of the better DC novels I have read but in the story Logan primarily relies on the martian part of his powers and neglects the red.In all honesty it feels like he is just martian boy instead of beast boy

It’s a great read so far and I am thankful for someone finally using beast boy in a fanfic

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