It's not bad, but it's feels like you're eating just the crust of a sandwich, I dont know whatever ai wrote this but the writing quality was alright. Everything just felt empty, like you're reasing a giant poem, nothing went anywhere, some chapter were in the same spot just stretched out like a kid trying to hit a word count. There is really no use in this character.
Table_Qwest
Liked it!
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