Fyrus
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Fyrus20dReplied to Shimo_KibaIn shimo we trust
"Iron Body," Samuel made his choice as time began once more. The gruff Taesoo huffed out of anger. In an instance, he closed the distance between Sam and him, raising a fist. Sam couldn't even see him move before the fist was inches from his face. He could only think one thing; 'I'm going to die again.' [1]- Fyrus23dCommented
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This paragraph has been deleted. - Fyrus25dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: New power
- Fyrus1mthCommentedCh 16 Unexpected Situation
- Fyrus2mthCommentedCh 11 Training and school
- Fyrus3mthReplied to Hugo_AdamThis book has been deleted.
- Fyrus7mthCommented"I think I love you." I say, awed and mystified and hopeful all at once.
- Fyrus7mthPosted
It's not bad, but it's feels like you're eating just the crust of a sandwich, I dont know whatever ai wrote this but the writing quality was alright. Everything just felt empty, like you're reasing a giant poem, nothing went anywhere, some chapter were in the same spot just stretched out like a kid trying to hit a word count. There is really no use in this character.
- Fyrus7mthCommentedCh 1 SLEEPING BEAUTY NEVER HAD IT THIS HARD
- Fyrus8mthCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7
- Fyrus8mthReplied to Requiem_SoulCh 13 A Deserved Slumber.
- Fyrus8mthCommentedCh -1 Help me!!!
- Fyrus8mthReplied to Jantipopo
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I decided on the FL by a coin toss - Fyrus8mthCommented
ugh ryuu is to overdone
The FL will either be Tiona or Ryuu, I haven't decided yet. Fortuna was always meant to fulfill the role of a friend/family member. Riveria would be an interesting choice, but I admittedly don't like the age gap despite the fact that the MC's lifespan is multiple thousands of years.