For those unwilling to read it all - I dont reccomend reading the book in its current version. If you wonder why, please read. —— I think that the story has high potential to be good, but currently its not that good. There is indeed a good english,good writing in sense of no mistakes but majority of chapters is simple gibberish that elufes feeling of being written by Ai and not planned, as there are so many things that just constantly repeat. Updating stability seems okay. Story development is rushed and lacks any sense of planning, no ,,goal”, relationships , friendships , characters to remember aside from MC, about whom we alos know very little about. a lot written about his long, ancient life). Sadly i would go to say that there is no story at all, atleast nothing to make it exciting, engaging and evoking a feeling of wanting and wondering to know what will next. When i was talking about characters , the situation of MC is just sad, because i bet there could be a lot written about his long,ancient life instead of just constantly reminding us of the joy,excitment and chaos he enjoys. No particular side characters, i dont count those few lines mentions that tell nothing of them. There is not even some dialogue… The world is propably the only thing aside from stablity of updates that seems to be good, i genuinely think that there was a thought before the creation of the names and that there was some thinking behind it, it just doesnt show in fullest. The book is sadly by me in the current state unreadable, if there is a change at any point i am willing to give it a reread.

The concept of my two favorite things, tower climbing with an op non-human mc, yet it somehow got ruined in every way. The dialogue is so cringe i think it did genuine physical damage. The way the Mc talks is unnecessary and the use of fancy words is repetitive and consumes most of the chapters. While the plot is bland and goes in one direction, there’s barley anything known about the Mc even though he’s immortal, you think there’d be some background right? but nope, same goes for side characters or relations, a robotic story with no real progression. So overall, i’ve gained permanent frown lines from the intense frowning and my hopes crushed on a waste of this true potential story design! So unless you’re an edgelord don’t read this ⚠️[img=angry]

Its a good concept but it feels like its an AI writing it not a real person

NOVEL HAS UPSIDES AND DOWNSIDES. THE MC WAS LIKABLE THEN BECAME WEIRD. HE ALWAYS HAS SOMETHING TO SAY AND ALWAYS DECIDES TO SAY IT AND NOT KEEP IT IN HIS HEAD. ALTHOUGH IT CAN BE EXPECTED FROM AN IMMORTAL SOMETIMES. OVERALL IT CAN IMPROVE AND HOPEFULLY AUTHOR WRITES MORE ACTIONS THAN "WORDS" IF YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY. ANYWAY 7.5/10 BUT ME GENEROUS SO HERE IS 5 STAR...

The author just uses a lot of fancy sounding words to fill up slave and make the MC look mysterious and sophisticated. Towers appeared and everyone suddenly became Captain America and wanted to save the world. There was none of the realistic chaos and upheaval. I only read a few chapters but I don't need to a Sharigan to know this novel is a waste of time

I have never read an utter piece of garbage like this before . Too much fancy sounding nonsense to make the MC look mysterious and sophisticated but it makes him look like an idiot . I only read this to get a fast pass and i regret choosing this one than the other really 😔😮‍💨

This is the second novel I’ve read this week that was written by an AI. In the other one, it was obvious that it was made by an AI. In this one, the author tried to disguise it, but it didn’t work at all because the extremely robotic dialogue the protagonist has with a stranger out of nowhere in the first chapter gave it all away.

It's not good at the moment, hopefully it gets better

Nice concept but too much drama to my liking