For those unwilling to read it all - I dont reccomend reading the book in its current version. If you wonder why, please read. —— I think that the story has high potential to be good, but currently its not that good. There is indeed a good english,good writing in sense of no mistakes but majority of chapters is simple gibberish that elufes feeling of being written by Ai and not planned, as there are so many things that just constantly repeat. Updating stability seems okay. Story development is rushed and lacks any sense of planning, no ,,goal”, relationships , friendships , characters to remember aside from MC, about whom we alos know very little about. a lot written about his long, ancient life). Sadly i would go to say that there is no story at all, atleast nothing to make it exciting, engaging and evoking a feeling of wanting and wondering to know what will next. When i was talking about characters , the situation of MC is just sad, because i bet there could be a lot written about his long,ancient life instead of just constantly reminding us of the joy,excitment and chaos he enjoys. No particular side characters, i dont count those few lines mentions that tell nothing of them. There is not even some dialogue… The world is propably the only thing aside from stablity of updates that seems to be good, i genuinely think that there was a thought before the creation of the names and that there was some thinking behind it, it just doesnt show in fullest. The book is sadly by me in the current state unreadable, if there is a change at any point i am willing to give it a reread.
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