Author here. If you have any questions, post them below, and I will answer them if it's not a spoiler. Some questions asked before: Is this novel harem? No Is MC OP? No. MC needs to use his head often. How is the MC? Mc has a bad past, where he is betrayed not just by his friends, and relatives, but also by society. He is the type that can burn the whole town to save his own loved one.

~ The Story Progressive is Slow. ~ There were some misspelled words such as Character Names, Cultivation Stages, Etc. ~ The Author has a Great Naming Sense! I bet the MC won't name his pet later(if he ever got any in the future) with Little White or something. ~ A Good Storytelling !! ~ Vivid Descriptions !! ~ The Character Portrayal was also nice !! ~ Great Romance !!! ~ Single FL !!!! Woooooooooo!!!!! Overall This is A Gem!! With a good Potential and Premise!! I hope the Author remains consistent and don't break our little heart.

10/10 The choice of words, description, characters, system, and features are well written. You had me worrying for the MC as he took risks hahaha.

The first chapter was hooking, it was interesting, the pacing was smooth, transitions felt natural, though their might be a little bit of confusion of I and He at the beginning nothing much as it can just be glossed over. I'll continue reading. The story and premise aren't that all new but the way it is written is interesting. Keep it up!

Great piece of work done, the writing is sublime and the story is very good. Keep going author, don't know why you don't have more views though

The start is already looking promising. I have only read four chapters but the writing is really sublime and hooks you in. Though I do have to say that it felt a bit crowded. perhaps break into small paragraphs? Overall a great reading experience

I've reached the latest chapter, and the book's vivid descriptions made me feel like I was right there. The first chapter had me completely hooked. One suggestion I have is to consider shorter paragraphs – at times, lengthy ones can be a bit daunting and affect my motivation. Overall, it’s a fantastic read!

Really enjoyed reading the first portion of this book and am excited to see how it grows in the future. Grammar wise there seem to be minor problems but nothing major and it’s an enjoyable read so most people won’t even notice The updates are good so far but need more chapters overall. Character development and descriptions are really well down and the characters feel like real humans rather than random robots pushing the plot. All in all it’s a great book with lots of promise and look forward to see what this Author can create.

Honestly confused on how this doesn't have more views. The writing is unbelivably descriptive that it makes it feel like you're the one experiencing what Liam is experiencing. Would rate this higher, but I've only read 2 chapters. But I am hooked! Will be reading more whenever I get the chance!

i really love this novel i dont really like this kind of novels i more likely to read a medivel settings novel but the storytelling kept me engaged and i like the MC one of the best MC i seen so far in novels