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PedagangSiput
PedagangSiputLv21yr
2023-11-14 08:03

Chapter 24. This story is not for us Chat Group fans, MC needs 17 chapters to activate the system. After active chat groups, the author did not create a definite plot for the future. I mean, what's with the boring talk like the MC is their advisor? This should be the main mission of this Chat Group, right? But no, in this fanfic the Chat Group is just Messages between very boring Waifu. I'm not sure what happens in the next chapter, but the first 24 chapters are terrible. The MC hasn't even displayed his powers to the world or done anything amazing like creating a god tool? sekte? or an organization of beggars like other fanfics that has a future plot to rule the world. Doesn't he have that mission? Hah... sorry, I'm just annoyed.

I am in ATG, I have a Chat Group

Kaoski
4.5
65 Chs

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AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

What’s the organization of beggars one?

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aramix_453
aramix_453Lv4

all i see harem and not interesting story and Characters there all just girl

1yr

AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

Even if this is bad I’ll give five stars for the harem, hmph those no harem crazies don’t know what they are talking about😤

1yr
Albert_Niigos
Albert_NiigosLv4

This is not a chat group but a system' harem group

1yr
AlexL96
AlexL96Lv2

Ignorando al de atrás dejo 5 estrellas por ver cómo es que tomas la historia original y creas tu versión... Y para las personas que nos le guste el harem pues fácil no lo leas es como el ntr si no te gusta no lo leas.....

1yr
Daoist92K85C
Daoist92K85CLv1

I would give it 3 stars but well, the reason why I give it 4 stars and not 5 is very simple this novel is a chat group but without using the chat group it is really disappointing for the moment, although I will not deny that the first 4 chapters are interesting, my recommendation please use the chat group more in the chapters even so that the members say stupid things, I liked your previous group chat novel because if the chat group was used I don't know what happened to you in this.

1yr
wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Honestly this deserves 4 stars, but I'm giving 5 because I enjoyed reading this, My only recommendation to the author is that you please fix the grammar, it is disastrous at times, where the reading loses the most quality is when there are internal thoughts of the characters, it looks like they are talking to someone else but actually they are just doing a monologue, it makes them look schizophrenic 😂

1yr
Ulescu_Mihai
Ulescu_MihaiLv5

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

1yr
BroMan987
BroMan987Lv14

First of all, don't really care one way or the other about harems, but ignoring that, this novel suffers from a major problem that most does. The characters all decide the mc needs to change, does stupid ideas (e.g. the teacher claming somehow having people to rely on, makes you week, but its really an excuse for her to seduce the mc or manipulate him, don't really care). So the novel is good, but most of the characters are stupid/selfish, and the mc just goes along with it. If you tolerate or like that, then you'd probably enjoy it because the novel is pretty decent quality if rather unimaginative.

1yr
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