I appreciate so much how you've taken the personalities of the characters into account and stayed true to their ages and previous experiences. I feel like we were let down in the films due to the limitations of child actors, like Anakin, not being able to understand the feelings of a slave. Your story is hitting so many good notes on the mental and emotional effects slavery would have on a kid with untapped power like the Chosen One. Looking forward to more.
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