Item: The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]
Rating: 4
Author: M_Static

M_StaticLv41yr

2023-09-25 15:55

Idea is great but if fast became harem trash... More attention is paid to women than to magic and the system. When I first started reading I really liked the story about going back to school. The focus very quickly shifted from improving oneself and magic to women.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

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4.6

78 Chs

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