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Snow_Fox18
Snow_Fox18Lv11yr
2023-08-15 16:39

The story is a bit fast, characters are kinda hard to relate to, and it's hard to really get immersed in the story. I'm not gonna say much about the story because this isn't really my type of story, but it would be nice if the revenge system had a solid villain and not just vaguely saying 'people who wronged me' in the beginning and that's about it, it has potential and I know you can get better through practice!

Revenge System_X

deadpotential
4.9
59 Chs

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unosknight7274
unosknight7274Lv14

haven't read it yet but what I Don't understand is if the mc lived his life without getting any revenge the first time around, then why do it in the second?

1yr
1
Snow_Fox18
Snow_Fox18Lv1

Wondering that as well, not sure XD

unosknight7274:haven't read it yet but what I Don't understand is if the mc lived his life without getting any revenge the first time around, then why do it in the second?
1yr
1
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Argelicano309
Argelicano309Lv12

¿Autor eres mujer? Ya que mi traductor creo que se equivocó de genero. De todos modos quiero que sigas actualizando se ve interesante, pero espero que agregues historia de trasfondo y no este particularmente lleno de capitulos de sexo en todos los capítulos aunque somos todos degenerados los que leen este tipo de historias todavía somos decentes.

1yr

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Hello thare i decided to look if something changed with you , and look at that.! It did.? This is very cool story you starting hare. I will give it a chance,Because i loved your Summertime Loving story. And if you want i can put pics for famale characters.?

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Great story, you are very good writer.I Hope Your Summertime Saga Novel will not die like that other one.

1yr
void_abyss_099
void_abyss_099Lv3

Do not drop this please I am getting addicted

10mth
Mateus_Novaes
Mateus_NovaesLv3

excelent...............................................................................................................................................................

1yr
Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4

Dear author, in most of these types of stories that I have read, the main character is transported back in time. However, it is usually a time when their lover has already cheated on them. So, I have a simple question: will our main character go back in time before being cheated on or after?

1yr
LittleBaron
LittleBaronLv11

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10mth
shyfix291
shyfix291Lv5

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Pedro_Sousa
Pedro_SousaLv15

Need more releases. Loving this novel, and hope to see more development with the characters. Definitely in my recommendation list.

1yr
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