Snow_Fox18
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Eyyy I'm from the Philippines too I mentioned it in my book rin actual XD
Ohhh, where are you from? Just curious ^w^ also have you tried grammerly? It's rlly good even the free version
The world background is amazing and unique, grammer could be improved, there are a lot of terms that I still struggle to understand, but the characters are pretty well written and I do love a good fantasy!
This chap is a bit of an info dump, and a little hard to process, I couldn't understand most of the references and I'm still fairly confused what a world fragment is, but I like the fantasy setting and I find this pretty good so far
Woah, I love the start! The world building is great! But grammer and punctuation could use a bit of work, but nonetheless an great start to a unique story♥️
The story is a bit fast, characters are kinda hard to relate to, and it's hard to really get immersed in the story. I'm not gonna say much about the story because this isn't really my type of story, but it would be nice if the revenge system had a solid villain and not just vaguely saying 'people who wronged me' in the beginning and that's about it, it has potential and I know you can get better through practice!
Tru XD