Review Detail of TheMasterNovice in Solar Sovereign (TDG)

Writing Quality 3/5: Constant grammatical errors. Stability of Updates 5/5: For when you were updating it. Story Development 3/5: He had a lot of chances to change things but didn't. Killing off the main perpetrators of the Sacred Family won't change much of anything, so I don't know why you even bother waiting for Nie Li. Character Design 3/5: He appears to have a clear goal in mind, but his decisions and ways of doing thing is rather strange. He's also not that interesting of a character. World Background 3/5: This is clearly an AU since the Dream Cloud World was sealed around the time of the Age of Darkness (more than a thousand years but not several or a few thousand like you've described). Not saying it's a bad idea, but it's not that interesting either.