Review Detail of Taragorm in Morningstar House (GOT)

Item: Morningstar House (GOT)
Rating: 3

Review detail

TaragormLv19mthTaragorm

The whole story feels like a timeskip mostly desciptions of events in passing feels more like a summary at the back of a book. Rather than show its all tell which makes it impossible to become immersed which is a shame because theres a good story here if it was told correctly.

Morningstar House (GOT)

AERIC35

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AERIC35AuthorAERIC35

well....fuck you...I don't give shit about your opinion ..It is not like I am writing this for anyone this novel it is just for practical entertainment

9mth

Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

yeah I feel that way too

9mth

AERIC35AuthorAERIC35

read my last chapter ..thanks

9mth

TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Why read latest chapters..its not worth trying now that you just copy and paste for 20 chapters and made that prologue but hage 5 actual maybe new plot. Doubt it. If your start is oazy and copy and paste means youll just be lazy later as well. Its lazy af and makes it not worth effort to even try anymore. Failed attempt

AERIC35:read my last chapter ..thanks

9mth