Grammar isn't great, but it's not the worst out there. The switch to Spanish is irritating, and the story is basic. Obviously, the author is pairing the mc with Alex even though she's like 11 or 12, and the mc is at least 30 at the bare minimum. But unfortunately grooming and pedophilia are accepted on this website so what can you do.
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